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i'm mentally dead.  i'm a strange man in a strange
world living a strange life.  i'm in the corner, simply
there, floating like a genie, and her existence
is my lamp...

...because she's my reason for living.

surrounded by misery in a hopeless world, i'm one
of the last soldiers still standing, staying strong until
the very end...

...for her.
©2009 *warzonestoic
:iconwarzonestoic:

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-shawn-

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:iconcoldfalafel:
this is amazing

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If you don't eat your meat you can't have any pudding! How can you have pudding if you don't eat your meat!? Another Brick in the Wall- Pink Floyd
:iconfatherofanartist:
This work has been featured here: [link]

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A woman has the last word in any argument.
Anything a man says after that is the beginning of a new argument.
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:iconwarzonestoic:
thank you for featuring me!
:iconjoliethemute:
Stop reading my mind...

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Take your brain parts outta your V-hole.
:iconfatherofanartist:
I really enjoyed your short, yet powerful piece!

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A woman has the last word in any argument.
Anything a man says after that is the beginning of a new argument.
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:iconfrozenfragrance:
Oh, wow. This is exactly how I'm
feeling, and it hurts. It's so
weird how I read this and thought,
'wow, this sounds exactly like me!'

It's short, and simple.

No overly fancy phrases.

Love it. :heart: :clap:


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"The firefly that sunk into the ocean of glamor
Denial is a lie over a desire
The temperature dyed in contradictions"

~"Filth in in the Beauty" by the GazettE
:iconbluesilveruu:
As always, wonderful to read about your love!
:icontapu:
It's awesome oo
I like reading something like this from a guy ^o^
:iconmusicalyssa:
not cliche, but not original. Its its own category. Good job :]

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"I'm fine" - code words for "save me"

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