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parole by *warzonestoic:iconwarzonestoic:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


my veins have become barbed wire,
my skin, a steel fence,
and i've become trapped within
myself, a prison of shame,
where i'm serving a life sentence
until sweet death's blissful parole.
©2009 *warzonestoic
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*angeleyes2480 Nov 9, 2009, 9:44:09 PM
:nod: Beautifully emoted, my dear!

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"...You have to set up the right atmosphere for women."-Kagome-

"Atmosphere...as in clouds and stuff??"-Inuyasha-


"Luke MacDonald, no relation to the restaurant."-Luke MacDonald-

"Any relation to the farm?"-Jason Stackhouse-True Blood
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*warzonestoic Nov 9, 2009, 9:44:48 PM
like a snake crawling out of its
own skin, i tend to shed once in a
while.
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*DaniWeewee Nov 9, 2009, 9:45:34 PM
hm - very interesting - it draws me in with the sadness of it... life is a prison then. :O

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Raisins used to be fat and juicy and now they're... shriveled. It's like they've got their lives stolen...They're really just humiliated grapes." -"Benny & Joon"
*Live-Love-Write *Autochrome-Lumiere
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*joliethemute Nov 9, 2009, 9:46:23 PM
Truest shit I've heard in a while.

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Take your brain parts outta your V-hole.
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~karelwolf Nov 9, 2009, 9:46:37 PM
Shame and rage, the two emotions that seem the most binding and destructive to me.

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I called them mad, and they called me mad, and damn them they outvoted me!
You know, religion truly is a wonderful thing, it is an essential part of one's spiritual and mental wellbeing. That said, BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!!!!!!*puts your head on a stick*
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*warzonestoic Nov 9, 2009, 9:46:49 PM
for some, it is. i guess it just
depends on the circumstances that
surround it, you know?
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~aquagirl7 Nov 9, 2009, 9:47:45 PM
this poem reminds me of someone who used to matter so much to me.....but unfortunately we had to part after when it seemed like ages I finally realized what a monster he was and how much he hurt me.....this is very beautiful, i really don't know how else to put it

its just lovely and it brings back memories, haunting and painful but oh so beautiful

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If all other feelings fail me, I still have pain to know that I'm alive.
:iconwarzonestoic:
*warzonestoic Nov 9, 2009, 9:48:09 PM
i say they're in the top three.
on my list, heartbreak ranks numero uno.
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*angeleyes2480 Nov 9, 2009, 9:48:51 PM
Well, some would say, once in a while is better than none at all... :shrug:

--
"...You have to set up the right atmosphere for women."-Kagome-

"Atmosphere...as in clouds and stuff??"-Inuyasha-


"Luke MacDonald, no relation to the restaurant."-Luke MacDonald-

"Any relation to the farm?"-Jason Stackhouse-True Blood
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*warzonestoic Nov 9, 2009, 9:50:06 PM
i've been down that road before too.
what did he do to hurt you so much?

it means the world to me, that you are able
to connect with what i'm sharing... and that
you can understand where i'm coming from with
this one.
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